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I prefer to work in a group. This way, not only can I make new friends and settle into the job quickly, but I can also continually learn how to be more social because these skills are extremely important in life. However, I still think that either working alone or in a group has its own advantages and disadvantages, for example: one advantage of working in a group is that if we have difficulties, then we can ask our co-workers immediately how to solve them, while one disadvantage is that working with co-workers may sometimes result in more pressure for everyone if the group doesn't communicate sufficiently. On the other hand, working alone is also a good choice. We just need to communicate to make sure the task is completed in a set period of time, but the most beneficial thing is that we can be more independent and get the sense of achievement at the same time. Ultimately, both are valuable options to choose!

非常好！有些方面你的句子有點長，並標點符號有些小錯誤。例如，逗號的背後沒有空格，句號的也沒有。

國語不是我的母語，不好意思。